Your technique's gotten noticeably better.
i can actually see this happening. For I starting to suspect just how, "good" and "fair" Bubblegum claims to be. Not saying she's evil from the start and was just manipulating us this whole time....BUT, I wouldn't be surprised if some fragment of the Lich still remained within her that allowed her to relive her old "conquering" life.
I love both of them, well done
the original's a lot creepier